Descriptive Writing - Animals

Snakes

Snakes are types of animals.

Snakes are long and skinny.  They look like a lizard.  Snakes have no legs.  They live in the zoo or forests and big snakes eat small animals.  Snakes are my favourite animal in the world.  I like snakes because they crawl and the other part I like about snakes is when they go "Ssssssssssssssssssss!"  Snakes are one of the poisonous animals.  Snakes can be green, brown, yellow or orange in colour.  In the zoo snakes crawl everywhere.  Another kind of snake is white, red and black.  Some snakes are light orange. 

I like snakes because they look like shoe laces.  I also like snakes because they sound like a bus door opening!

JA

Lions

A lion is a type of animal.

Lions look realy cool.  The lion is the king of the jungle.  Lions are realy dangerous because they eat meat.  Lions can catch giraffes, zebras, pigs and any other animal.  The lions eat like monsters, but before they eat, they must kill their prey.  People are afraid of lions because they are scary. 

AM