Descriptive Writing

We've been doing Descriptive Writing at school.  Miss B is trying to get us to use connectives in our writing to make our sentences longer and more interesting.  How do you think we're doing?

My Lunchbox



Today I am writing about my lunchbox. 

On the front of my lunchbox I have a fairy with blue hair and a purple T-shirt.  A lunchbox can hold food inside.  I like the colours of my lunchbox.  I have a zip on my lunchbox so I can open it and close it.  My lunchbox is shaped like a square.  My lunch box is soft and purple.

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My Lunchbox

 

Lunchboxes are very important because you need them to keep your lunch in.  The colour of my lunchbox is pink.  That's why I chose it!  it has four containers to put my morning tea and lunch in.  Sometimes I have two lunchboxes.  They are both unique.  The lids are red and the bottom is clear.  The top three containers are for my morning tea and the bottom part is for my lunch.  When I open/close it, it makes a click, click, click sound.  I always take my lunchbox to school.  I take my lunchbox in my bag to school.  We can even take it to camps or sleepovers. 

Now you know why lunchboxes are very important and know all about my lunchboxes.

KL