Shared Writing

Here is some shared writing we did all together about Fun Swimming last Thursday.  We had to think of extra details to add to our writing to make it more interesting for YOU to read!

Fun Swimming

Fun Swimming is a fun day we have once a year at our school.

At Fun Swimming the Middle School children have relays and races.  Teachers and some parents watch the children swim.

At Fun Swimming there is lots of noise because the children cheer for their team-mates. 

The water in the pool feels cold but the children fell warmer when they start to swim.

There are lots of different races to do at Fun Swimming like the shark race, jet boat race, swimming with a ball, swimming with one arm, the train race, freestyle and lots, lots more

What makes Fun Swimming fun is when a teacher puts a blow-up crocodile into the pool.  When that happens all the children have to get out of the pool as fast as possible. 

Come and watch our Fun Swimming next year!